The reason why people should not be allowed to carry concealed guns on college campuses is that it could cause legal demand on college.

this is the claim.

i am writing a research paper and this is a third body paragraph. in the paragraph you need to mention about mass shooting event and accidental shooting. there should be at least two references that support the claim. please use references below if it fits on (my professor wants to use the trace or ncsl..) and after using them please attach them as pdf file and highlight where you used.

https://www.thetrace.org/2017/04/campus-carry-move…

http://www.ncsl.org/research/education/guns-on-cam…

don’t be emotional and use easy word please. the paragraph should be one page. not half page.

also this is what i wrote and there is no evidence and it is too emotional my professor said. so don’t be too emotional like me. be logical please..

The third reason why people should not be allowed to carry concealed guns on college campuses is that it could cause legal demand on college. Imagine what would happen if a group of students with guns got into an argument on college campuses. This might result into careless shootings as gun holders take sides. Since students are not properly trained to use guns, it could also result into killing other innocent people around the college. Although proponents of concealed guns on college campus argue that it would reduce mass shootings, truth of the matter is that it will actually increase mass shootings. College students like playing and teasing each other and if they are allowed to have guns they would accidentally to hurt themselves or others. For example, because of drug abuse, student might try to use the guns without the intention of shooting but end up hurting someone accidentally. When they get drunk and unreasonable, they might try to use the guns hence accidental shooting.