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How has technology made us lazy? I picked this topic since I am studding for a computer information technology degree, it is something I am more comfortable with. Many people will argue that technology has improved way of life, and expanded new horizons. however, technology has also made everything comfortable for human beings, and if you ask me, I would say that technology made life too easy for everybody. Although technology has many advantages for daily life, it also comes with many disadvantages. Therefore I think this topic is very interesting and easy to debate. One way I am going to prepare myself for the final persuasive essay is by asking other people’s opinion about the topic, in other words, do a lot of research about the topic. Maybe I will even find some interesting facts that I will end up sharing in my final paper. Another thing I will do, starting today since I know my topic, is write as many rough drafts as possible and from those take the best paragraphs. The last thing I will do to prepare for the final essay, would be to have somebody else read it just to make sure my sentences make sence.